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Wheat Field 10 by a-murmuration Wheat Field 10 by a-murmuration
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The photo gives a nice first impression, but I would like to see the horizon moved up or down enough that the horizon line does not cut the photo in half (thirds would be better). I think the real interest is in the sky, especially since the wheat in the foreground is a bit out of focus. Perhaps crop out a bit of the wheat field (to just below the dark horizontal line in the field). I would try bumping the saturation a bit (especially the reds and yellows) to add a bit more interest to the wheat if that is where you want the focus to be. I really like the way the fence/wall line in the back of the field draws the eye around the photo. I think this would be even more effective with the foreground cropped closer. Overall it is a nice landscape, but needs a bit more "pop".
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soultaker82 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
A beautiful view :)
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a-murmuration Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you!
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soultaker82 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You are welcome :)
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Canon PowerShot SX130 IS
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Jul 28, 2012, 6:32:08 PM
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